Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Jenna's Creative Writing

Check out Jenna's story about a cyclone that she did for homework. She used lots of interesting language features in her writing!

Cyclone
From my bedroom window, I can see rain falling as hard as a stone; people cold and wet, wrapped in blankets and coats but still cold; hail bouncing like a ball and crashing on the road, making people slip over; iron garage roofs blowing off; stones flying up and breaking windows, rolling along the road faster than the cars; trees as tall as a sky tower waving madly and branches crashing off; I can hear the wind whistling like a washing machine, making coconut trees fall down; stones clicking against the windows; thunder loud and scary like an evil demon. Lightning destroying people with its fire. Scary, like being chased by a crocodile.
By Jenna Casey!

Our wonderings about the Olympics

We have been thinking about what we would like to learn about the Olympics. 
Here are our wonderings. Have you got any more wonderings? Post a comment!