Tuesday, July 12, 2011

Room 16's Amazing rainforest story

The magical rainforest
As I walk through the rainforest, I can hear birds crunching little juicy bugs between their beaks. Lime green frogs leap from lily pad to lily pad. The colourful flowers smell like lavender. The mist around the trees makes them fade away. I scurry past dark and scary shadows. 
The turquoise blue whirling waterfall makes splashing sounds as I walk past. The rainforest is truly magical. 
By everyone in Room 16
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10 comments:

  1. LizzieJuly 12, 2011 at 9:57 AM

    Wow thats a very cool story! I liked it how we all did something to make this story.

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  2. Wendy- Maxine's MumJuly 12, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    Awsome story room 16.

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  3. bethanyJuly 13, 2011 at 10:46 AM

    i love the story room 16!I love all the detail

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  4. lizzieJuly 13, 2011 at 10:49 AM

    This is such a intresting story.

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  5. RoisinJuly 13, 2011 at 2:21 PM

    It dose sound magic.

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  6. grace from room 16July 19, 2011 at 7:01 PM

    i love writing about the rainforst now i want to go there

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  7. TaylaJuly 21, 2011 at 4:43 PM

    Lovely writing room 16! You are the best teacher ever

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  8. bethany from room 16July 30, 2011 at 6:12 PM

    WOW,room16 your story makes a dream come true in my world

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  9. maxineAugust 1, 2011 at 12:33 PM

    that is a cool story room16

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  10. jasmine from room16August 2, 2011 at 12:04 PM

    I have leant lots about the rainforest

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