In the night the heavy hail woke me up in a flash.I got up and I said Mum what is that dumpy noise on the roof? Mum said it is the hail so I went out side to have a look. It was so cold it felt like the south pole. It made my feet go purple. I ran inside to get dried. I felt wide awake.
By Max
Awesome job Max. You are working so hard :) keep it up. From Mum and Dad
ReplyDeleteWOW Max! I really love your writing. It is the most awesome writing I have head all day. I never thought I would say that you are awesome!=}
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max i love how you said that you woke up in a flash.that is the best story ever!Keep it up max your story is amizing
ReplyDeletethat is a great awesome story Wow snow
ReplyDeleteWOW max what a fantastic story you made.
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